Halrloprillalar ([info]prillalar) wrote,
@ 2006-03-27 17:22:00
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PoT Fic: King (Ryoma, Atobe, Tezuka)
King by Halrloprillalar
Prince of Tennis, Ryoma, Atobe, Tezuka. 2200 words. G.
What if things were different?

Spoilers/Timeframe: The first Hyotei match.
Notes: Idea from a comment by [info]storyteller.


"Buchou," Ryoma says, "make sure you win."

"Of course." Atobe picks up his racquet. "Feast your eyes on my beautiful victory."

Because you're taking my spot, Ryoma wants to say. But he doesn't like it when Atobe laughs at him.

Atobe walks out onto the court. The cheering is deafening. The winner will be Hyotei, the loser will be Seigaku. The winner will be Atobe, the loser will be Tezuka. Ryoma pulls his cap down over his eyes and leans forward to watch the game.

The whole club has been talking for weeks, about Seigaku and Tezuka and Fuji. Fuji is pretty good, Ryoma figures, but if they had only let him play they wouldn't have lost that match. Akutagawa-senpai is lazy.

The crowd grows quiet as Atobe and Tezuka face each other over the net. Ryoma wonders how many games it will take Atobe.

Atobe wins the first point. Atobe, Atobe, Atobe. It's annoying.

They rally and it's strange that Atobe doesn't just end it. But then Ryoma sees it, the way the ball curves back to Tezuka, no matter where Atobe hits. It's just what the old man does, when he wants to be annoying. Ryoma watches to see how Atobe will break it.

Tezuka takes the point. Atobe laughs, puts his hand in front of his face. It looks stupid. "You're pretty good, Tezuka," he says, "with that arm of yours."

Everybody mutters about Tezuka's arm. Ryoma stares at Atobe. He's always right, somehow.

Ryoma looks at Tezuka, trying to see what Atobe sees. But Tezuka's arm looks like an arm and there is nothing in Tezuka's face. If Ryoma were on the court, he would see it then. He would feel it.

Atobe serves and Ryoma watches. They're both good, there are no mistakes. The ball flows between them and the people around Ryoma whisper about the scouts in the stands.

Tezuka hits a drop shot that rolls back towards the net and Atobe's service game is broken. Atobe's eyes open wide with shock.

Ryoma scowls. He should be the one to make Atobe look like that.

+

The tennis club at Hyotei has over two hundred members and every one of them is ranked. Each locker has a number pinned up over it, tacked lightly so it's easy to remove.

On his first day, Ryoma looks for number 1. "The Regulars have their own locker room," someone tells him. Ryoma is 219. First-years have to work their way up.

On his second day, Ryoma challenges number 70. In a week, he is number 19 and Sakaki comes out to watch one of his matches. Ryoma switches his racquet to his left hand.

In two weeks, Ryoma is number 8, with a locker in the Regulars clubhouse and more fan letters than will fit inside his shoe box. He throws them out and goes into the clubhouse for the first time.

There are no numbers tacked up over the lockers. The boys are changing, talking. Ohtori shows Ryoma where to put his things. "I've watched you play," he says. "Let's do a good job together."

Ryoma walks across the room and stops in front of Atobe. "Buchou," he says, "play a match with me."

+

Tezuka takes another game and now he's 3-2. The Regulars exclaim to each other, Hyotei buzz like anxious bees. Ryoma just watches. Atobe isn't worried: his play is controlled, his face is satisfied. Now Ryoma knows why Atobe didn't berate the others when they lost their matches. He wanted to play.

Ryoma wants to play. The tension on the court pulls at him, the ball calls out to be hit. Tezuka begs to be defeated. It's not fair, Ryoma thinks and shifts in his seat.

Tezuka lobs, high and careless, and Ryoma leans in closer to see why. Atobe doesn't smash, stranger still, and the rally continues. "Your elbow has completely healed, hasn't it, Tezuka?" Atobe says and now Ryoma can see. The way Tezuka lifts his arm, the slight strain in his movement. The elbow is healed but the shoulder is weak.

Atobe's finish is so heavy it tears the racquet from Tezuka's hand. Tezuka stands for a moment, looking at Atobe. Then he picks up his racquet and serves.

+

Atobe laughs. "You're not enough for a warm-up." Ryoma doesn't answer. He just stands there and doesn't move away. Finally Atobe shrugs. "If you want to see my wonderful play, I'll show you. Then you can run home crying. Right, Kabaji?"

"Yes," Kabaji says and picks up Atobe's bag.

A crowd comes out to watch them. Ryoma stares at Atobe when they meet across the net. He only has to knock Atobe down to climb to the top. "Here," he says and holds out his handkerchief.

"What's this?"

"You'll be the one crying." He spins his racquet.

"Smooth," Atobe says. It's rough. Ryoma grins and gives Atobe his best Twist Serve.

He doesn't win a single game.

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The match goes on and on and the crowd grows larger. Ryoma is used to two sets, three sets in a match. One set is for weaklings. But this match isn't weak, Tezuka and Atobe are the strongest Ryoma has ever seen, away from home.

Ryoma watches for Tezuka's drop shot. He just needs to see it a few more times. But it's Tezuka's face that catches him. Tezuka knows, Ryoma can tell, he knows what Atobe is doing, and it's working. His body is failing. But he won't stop.

Neither will Atobe.

+

The next day, Ryoma asks Atobe for another match. Atobe just laughs and walks away, Kabaji three steps behind him.

The day after that, Ryoma tries again. "Play Oshitari," Atobe says, "if you just need someone to beat you."

On the third day, Atobe agrees to play. It takes him twelve minutes to win 6-0. After practice, Ryoma goes home and plays against his father for an hour, losing, losing, losing. He scowls at anyone who speaks to him and even Karupin won't stay with him for long.

He keeps after Atobe and once in a while, Atobe obliges, tossing his hair before he serves and keeping Kabaji waiting for him on the bench. The matches get longer, twenty minutes, half an hour, and Ryoma takes a game or two in each set.

There are other matches, challenges from below, and Ryoma wins them all. Every lunch hour, he hits a ball against a wall, over and over, imagining it striking Atobe between the eyes, leaving an ugly bruise. The next shot knocks the cigarette out of his father's mouth.

The city tournament comes and goes. Ryoma plays all his matches right-handed. If he tied the other hand behind his back, it wouldn't make any difference. The prefectural tournament is much the same, until the semi-final.

They play a no-name public school, but the members are strong and Ryoma has to work for his win. See that? he wants to say to Atobe, but now Shishido is losing so badly nobody can think of anything else.

They play in the consolation match a week later. Ryoma's opponent is good, another left-hander, but Ryoma has played southpaws before, back in America, and he never doubts that he will win.

In the first round of the Kantou tournament, they face Seigaku. Ryoma can't wait, it's sure to be a good match, someone he can take some pleasure in defeating.

Sakaki announces the match order. Ryoma doesn't get to play.

+

It's been an hour and a half. It's 6-5 for Tezuka now and the Seigaku players are cheering.

If Hyotei lose to Seigaku, they are out of the tournament and that's it for the summer. The third-years will leave the club. Number one is meaningless unless Ryoma takes it away.

Tezuka lobs again and Atobe jumps up to smash. Here it is, the crowd says. We'll see it now. Hametsu e no rondo. Ryoma hates Tezuka, even though he's never met him, for making Atobe play like this, using moves he has never used against Ryoma.

But the ball curves back to Tezuka and he makes his drop shot. Ryoma has the form now. He hits it in his head five times while the crowd is still cheering for the point.

Atobe frowns and Ryoma knows how uncertain the game is right now. Don't lose, he wants to say. Don't lose before I can defeat you.

They play and Tezuka is at match point. The crowd is quiet, everyone is holding their breath, wondering if this will be the end. Don't lose, Ryoma thinks and pulls his cap lower over his eyes.

Then Tezuka breaks. He drops his racquet, cries out, falls to his knees. His shoulder is finished. The match is over.

Ryoma leans back, looking at Atobe, as Tezuka's teammates run out to the court. Atobe's done it, seen the small weakness in a strong man, and used that to defeat him.

He doesn't look happy.

"Echizen," Sakaki says from the bench. He doesn't turn around, but his voice carries. "Go warm up."

He'll get to play after all, to break the tie. "Yes," Ryoma says and picks up his racquet and a ball. He pauses halfway up the stairs. "Help me warm up," he says. "It's a chance to use your racquet." Hiyoshi doesn't answer.

Ryoma grins and goes to hit the ball against a wall, over and over, hitting Atobe, then his father between the eyes. He sends in a shot for Tezuka too, even though he lost. It doesn't quite seem like either of them won.

Cheers surge up from the crowd, so loud Ryoma turns his head. He jogs back to the court. They are still playing, tiebreak now, 35-36.

How can Tezuka continue? There's no pain in his face now, but Ryoma can see the way his shoulder grinds. His serves are useless. He gets points only on returns. On every return.

They look the same to Ryoma now, Atobe and Tezuka, the same expression on their faces. Ryoma has never seen Atobe look like that. And neither of them will give up.

Then Tezuka moves up to mid-court and Ryoma knows the drop shot is coming. He hits it along with Tezuka, feinting the backswing, brushing the ball with the strings. If Tezuka doesn't take this point, he will lose. The ball drops but it won't roll back and Ryoma is surprised by the moment of disappointment he feels.

Atobe dives for the ball. It curves over the net, right to Tezuka, and there isn't a sound in the stands as he hits it.

His return goes into the net.

Ryoma feels himself relax. He'll still get his chance to be number one. And now he gets to play.

Atobe and Tezuka shake hands and the crowd erupts with noise. Atobe raises Tezuka's hand into the air. Atobe does this. It doesn't quite seem like either of them lost.

Ryoma comes down the stairs. Now, finally, he can play. He'll show them all it's not just Atobe and Tezuka.

Atobe is sitting in the stands now, panting, a towel over his head and Kabaji behind him. Ryoma wants him to watch, to see Ryoma's wonderful play. He wants them both to watch, Atobe and Tezuka.

A good match. Ryoma walks out onto the court. A good opponent. I'll show them all.

"Echizen from Hyotei against Arai from Seigaku. Hyotei's Echizen to serve."

A good match, Ryoma thinks, and throws the ball into the air.

+

Atobe doesn't come to practice on Monday. On Tuesday, he stands with Sakaki, talking in a low voice. He doesn't speak to anyone else but Kabaji.

Wednesday, Atobe pulls Ryoma out of doubles practice. "We're going to play a match," he says and walks over to the best court. "We'll face Rikkai in the finals. Hyotei has a reputation to uphold."

No one else is there, not even Kabaji. Ryoma holds his hand up over his face and looks at Atobe. "You're a hundred years too early," Atobe says and Ryoma can't see weakness in him at all.

Atobe serves. The ball is heavy and Ryoma almost botches the return. Atobe hits it to the far corner.

"You can't beat me," Atobe says, "but at least try." He serves again. "Try!"

Ryoma tries. It's hard, much harder than before. The ball is alive today, Atobe is awake, pressing Ryoma with his strength. Ryoma meets it, presses back as hard as he can. He runs faster, jumps higher. Sweat runs down his back, trickles through his hair.

"Try!" Atobe says and takes another point.

Ryoma tries. His arms burn, his feet drag. He isn't thinking, just swinging, swinging, trying. The ball comes at him, he sees Atobe move. He feints his backswing, brushes the ball with the strings. It lands in Atobe's court and rolls back towards the net.

For half a second, Atobe's eyes go wide. "Mada mada dane," Ryoma says and Atobe laughs.

"You can't beat me," he says. And Ryoma doesn't. Not this match.

But there's still time to be number one.



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[info]lynnmonster
2006-03-27 05:34 pm UTC (link)
*SQUEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE*

What a perfect AU punch to the brain!

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[info]prillalar
2006-03-27 10:14 pm UTC (link)
I hope your brain is all right now. :) Thank you!

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[info]zauberer_sirin
2006-03-27 05:34 pm UTC (link)
*stares speechless at the screen*

bloody brilliant...

*stares some more*

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[info]prillalar
2006-03-27 10:15 pm UTC (link)
I feel like I should wave my hand in front of your face. *g* Thank you!

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[info]seii_ryu
2006-03-27 05:40 pm UTC (link)
Wow! Great ideas you get from talking about this... opens up possibilities.

At first glance, Ryoma does seem better suited to Hyoutei (or even Rikkai, provided that he gets on the Regulars), but Seigaku's better for him. Just better. All the same, this almost makes Hyoutei!Ryoma work. And that little jab at Hiyoshi ^^.

But no one can ever replace Tezbear in Ryoma's affections! *turns fangirly*

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[info]prillalar
2006-03-27 10:17 pm UTC (link)
I think Seigaku gave Ryoma something besides tennis, which was what he really needed to help him grow.

Poor Hiyoshi! He's never going to get a break, is he?

I'm glad you liked this!

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[info]amamiyarin
2006-03-27 05:42 pm UTC (link)
Wow. WOW.

Impressive. ^_____________^ Great job!

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[info]prillalar
2006-03-27 10:18 pm UTC (link)
Thank you very much!

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[info]annotated_em
2006-03-27 05:43 pm UTC (link)
Oh. Oh wow, that is fantastic. *salutes*

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[info]prillalar
2006-03-27 10:18 pm UTC (link)
Thank you, sweetie. That's really great to hear. :)

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[info]akatonbo
2006-03-27 05:48 pm UTC (link)
*squishes the stuffing out of Hyoutei!Ryouma, because he needs it*

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[info]prillalar
2006-03-27 10:19 pm UTC (link)
He really, really does. And I felt so badly for poor Arai as well. *snugs both*

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[info]mayhap
2006-03-27 05:49 pm UTC (link)
Oh wow. Spot on and brilliant.

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[info]prillalar
2006-03-27 10:20 pm UTC (link)
Thank you!

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[info]sugaahcube
2006-03-27 05:55 pm UTC (link)
That was awesome ♥

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[info]prillalar
2006-03-27 10:20 pm UTC (link)
I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

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[info]kat8cha
2006-03-27 06:10 pm UTC (link)
.... one word.

Ooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

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[info]prillalar
2006-03-27 10:20 pm UTC (link)
Hee! Thank you. :)

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[info]krysyuy
2006-03-27 06:20 pm UTC (link)
As usual, you don't disappoint. =0D

This was really a wonderful read. Of course, my attention was immediately caught when Atobe ends up being the "buchou" Ryoma's talking to.

For some reason, I also really love the ending. It all works so well. ^_^

Keep up the amazing work!

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[info]prillalar
2006-03-27 10:25 pm UTC (link)
I'm really glad you enjoyed it, especially the ending. I had a lot of fun building this up and thinking about what it would be like for Ryoma. Thanks!

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[info]ad_exia
2006-03-27 06:25 pm UTC (link)
Wow~ That was amazingly written, I loved it! Wonderful job! <3

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[info]prillalar
2006-03-27 10:25 pm UTC (link)
Thank you so much!

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[info]weetanya
2006-03-27 06:32 pm UTC (link)
Poor Arai. Poor Seigaku. Poor Tezuka.

...But in a good way!

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[info]prillalar
2006-03-27 10:26 pm UTC (link)
I know, I know. Especially Arai. I feel guilt over him, poor thing.

I'm glad you liked this!

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[info]reposoir
2006-03-27 06:36 pm UTC (link)
Dayum that was enjoyable! And so different- I really enjoyed it. Thanks, Prillalar! :D

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[info]prillalar
2006-03-27 10:26 pm UTC (link)
You're so welcome! And thanks for taking the time to let me know what you thought. :)

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[info]mousapelli
2006-03-27 06:53 pm UTC (link)
hee, I love your Ryoma, and the way you hint at Tezuka and Atobe without Ryoma truly understanding either of them. I like the way you sort of show that Hyoutei might be a great place for Ryoma's tennis, because he gets to play and play and play, but an awful place for him to become a decent human being. Just the difference in how he stares at Tezuka and sees nothing but himself. And also his puzzlement over why Atobe isn't satisfied with the match, his inherent misunderstanding, or total lack of understanding, about what is wrong with that match.

i just read through the whole Hyoutei matches run this afternoon, searching for second years to AftS, so i was thinking about the Atobe/Tezuka match, and just wondering what, if anything, Atobe took away as the lesson of that match. He's clearly irritated by the result, but i wonder what the upshot of that is? If he changes? Or at least, gets taught by Tezuka, as everybody gets in the end, that tennis that breaks other people is wrong and unsatisfying.

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[info]prillalar
2006-03-28 05:41 am UTC (link)
I like the way you sort of show that Hyoutei might be a great place for Ryoma's tennis, because he gets to play and play and play, but an awful place for him to become a decent human being.

That's really the crux of it, I think. The series is so much about Ryoma's socialization and that's just not going to happen to the same extent in Hyotei. And nobody in Hyotei teaches him what tennis really *means*. (Though there are a few who could, if he le them.)

Or at least, gets taught by Tezuka, as everybody gets in the end, that tennis that breaks other people is wrong and unsatisfying.

Definitely this. And I think there's more, though it's hard to say exactly what it is. Maybe the same lesson Tezuka teaches Ryoma, about tennis for its own sake.

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[info]shini_tenshi
2006-03-27 07:04 pm UTC (link)
*_* Ryoma at Hyotei...*faints*

Atobe as Ryoma's captain is too funny, especially since Ryoma always calls him the 'Monkey King'...

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[info]prillalar
2006-03-28 05:41 am UTC (link)
I'm glad that you enjoyed it!

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[info]marksykins
2006-03-27 07:04 pm UTC (link)
Oooh, this is really wonderful. And it makes me yearn for good Atobe/Ryoma fic, which I'm sure must exist somewhere, but I'll make do with this for now.

On his second day, Ryoma challenges number 70. In a week, he is number 19 and Sakaki comes out to watch one of his matches. Ryoma switches his racquet to his left hand.

That made my toes curl. :D

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[info]prillalar
2006-03-28 05:46 am UTC (link)
Thank you. :) I had a lot of fun with the Hyotei bits, working out how Ryoma would fit in there. I haven't read any AtoRyo, except on ff.n, but I'm sure there must be some good stuff.

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[info]storyteller
2006-03-27 07:26 pm UTC (link)
OMG, YESSSSS. Waaah, you took this idea and made it shine. I love, love how in character Ryoma is, how he pushes his way through Hyotei. It hurt so much to read Tezuka lose again, I almost wanted to look away, hated Ryoma's reaction to it, but it was so right. I loved he last bit the best because, God, it works to have Atobe as his captain.

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[info]prillalar
2006-03-28 05:55 am UTC (link)
I think Ryoma would love Hyotei. It's not the best place for him, but he might think so.

I loved he last bit the best because, God, it works to have Atobe as his captain.

They are so alike, I think, so much more than Ryoma is like Tezuka. I had a lot of fun playing them off each other.

Thank you so much for making me think about this in the first place! I really enjoyed going through the story, working out how it would go.

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[info]iweep4u
2006-03-27 09:05 pm UTC (link)
Oh my goodness *__*

This was a really amazing take on an interesting idea *_____* Good job! Thanks for sharing it with all of us!

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[info]prillalar
2006-03-28 05:57 am UTC (link)
You're welcome! I loved getting to think through this, thinking about how things would be different. I'm glad you enjoyed reading it.

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[info]i_smile
2006-03-27 09:09 pm UTC (link)
Oh, man. Ryoma and Atobe's first game, and their last. So awesome. I love this, and the way Ryoma still only has room in himself for tennis and his captain's ability. It probably couldn't have worked the same way with any team but this one, since Hyoutei and Seigaku are in a lot of ways pretty much the same team. :D

It's definitely beneficial for the captain of the club to have Ryoma to play against, to work for. Atobe doesn't need a pillar like Tezuka needs one--the Hyoutei club is stronger than that--and it seems as though Ryoma here has become somewhat more personal for Atobe than he was for Tezuka; a boy, not a symbol. And Ryoma is trying so hard to be better and better, <3.

(I can imagine him being better, and faster, if he were at Hyoutei; he'd also probably end up as the same little boy he was when he entered. It would be like being spurred to play his father all day, every day; in Seigaku, he's at least forced to think about other things once in a while, and almost made to have friends, which I can't imagine would be the case at Hyoutei.)

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[info]prillalar
2006-03-28 06:10 am UTC (link)
It's definitely beneficial for the captain of the club to have Ryoma to play against, to work for.

One thing I've really wished we got to see in the canon is Ryoma directly challenging Tezuka. Tezuka sort of manoeuvres it so he doesn't have to.

Atobe doesn't need a pillar like Tezuka needs one--the Hyoutei club is stronger than that--and it seems as though Ryoma here has become somewhat more personal for Atobe than he was for Tezuka; a boy, not a symbol.

Hyotei is all about strength and ability and for Tezuka, being a pillar is more than just being the best player, I think. It's about leadership and mood-making and holding the team together.

And you're right -- I think Tezuka objectifies Ryoma to a large degree and Atobe is never going to do that.

I can imagine him being better, and faster, if he were at Hyoutei; he'd also probably end up as the same little boy he was when he entered.

Yes, exactly. Though if Atobe changes, as I think he does, a little, then Ryoma may be able to change too.

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[info]wolfsbane68
2006-03-27 11:19 pm UTC (link)
Loved the fic :-D Though reading ch. 305 actually makes me wonder whether Seigaku is any good for Echizen as a human being either.

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[info]prillalar
2006-03-28 06:11 am UTC (link)
Thank you! 305 was a bit problematic, I agree. But they're all still kids, so I think there's hope for them yet. :)

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[info]assyrian
2006-03-27 11:40 pm UTC (link)
*hearts you* This is amazing. It's so very convincing, and you do justice to all the characters.

The Zero Shiki ending is perfect.

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[info]prillalar
2006-03-28 06:12 am UTC (link)
I'm so glad you enjoyed it! It was really fun to work on, to puzzle out how things would be different.

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[info]trinityhelix
2006-03-27 11:47 pm UTC (link)
*wibbles* Lovely, lovely concept. ;_; Thank you so much for writing this!


...Might I ask if there is a Ryoma/Fudomine fic on the horizon?

...and if there isn't, would you mind terribly if I gave it a shot? (I'd credit, of course). :D

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[info]prillalar
2006-03-28 06:16 am UTC (link)
I'm so glad you liked it! I don't plan any more of these, no. You should totally go for it. And there's no need to credit me -- I don't have a monopoly on Harry in Slytherin Ryoma-at-other-schools ideas. :) I'd love to see what you come up with.

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[info]kalamitykat
2006-03-28 12:28 am UTC (link)
I adore your writing in general, but this fic is pure genius. I am intrigued by the idea of Ryoma in any of the other teams ever since you mentioned it, and this fic is perfect.

Although I wonder... Would Seigaku even reach the Kantou Tournament without Ryoma? I mean, sure thing, they fought hard for it, but it was Echizen that fired them up enough to actually get there.

Or maybe I'm just giving him too much credit. ^_^;

Lovely fic as always. ♥

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[info]prillalar
2006-03-28 06:21 am UTC (link)
I think I started working on this soon after that AUs post. After [info]storyteller mentioned it, I couldn't get the idea of this match out of my head. I'm really glad that you enjoyed the result. :)

Would Seigaku even reach the Kantou Tournament without Ryoma?

It's hard to say, but I think they would have gone at least that far. Tezuka and Oishi would have made sure of it.

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(no subject) - [info]kalamitykat, 2006-03-28 07:09 am UTC (Expand)

[info]quinesale
2006-03-28 01:17 am UTC (link)
*is rendered speechless*
Amazing, love it!
Don't know what to say else.

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[info]prillalar
2006-03-28 06:22 am UTC (link)
Hee! Speechless is good. :) I'm so glad you liked it!

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[info]goruden_kombi
2006-03-28 02:00 am UTC (link)
Wow. This is really, really good. Enrapturing. ♥

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[info]prillalar
2006-03-28 06:23 am UTC (link)
Thank you so much! That's great to hear. :)

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