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PoT Fic: According To (InuKai)
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A little bit of InuKai a little early for International Fanfic Kiss Day on Monday.


According To by Halrloprillalar
Prince of Tennis, InuKai, 400 words, PG.

[ also posted to inu_kai ]


Inui had a plan. A good plan. It was detailed, it was precise, with instructions for every contingency. It had a 86% chance of success. And if he adjusted it mid-execution, the odds would be even more favourable.

In just two weeks, Inui would achieve his objective through careful adherence to the plan.

Now he just had to find it...

He flipped through his notebook a third time, but no loose paper fell out. He pawed through his bag, then turned out the contents onto a bench in the club room. He was late for practice, but if he didn't start with Step 1 today, it would throw out the whole schedule.

He stood up and checked his pockets again. It had to be somewhere.

"Senpai?" Kaidoh was standing in the doorway. The sun was behind him and it was hard to see his face. He came into the room and closed the door behind him.

"I'll be right out to practice," Inui said. "I'm just looking for something."

"Is it this?" And Kaidoh held out his hand. In Kaidoh's hand was a piece of paper. On the piece of paper were the words Plan to Win Kaidoh's Affections Within Two Weeks. Underlined. Twice.

Inui could feel the colour draining out of his face. He could feel his throat dry up. It took three tries before he could speak. "About that," he said and stopped because he didn't know what to say. There were no instructions for this particular contingency.

"Inui-senpai," Kaidoh said and his voice was a growl.

"About that," Inui said again.

Kaidoh grabbed Inui's collar in his fist, yanked him down, and Inui just had time to think, oh fuck, he's going to before Kaidoh kissed him. Hard, fast, his mouth not quite square to Inui's. When Kaidoh let go, Inui's lips were stinging, his whole skin was stinging, his joints locked into place.

"Yes," Inui said and Kaidoh ducked his head before he turned and ran outside. Inui's joints unlocked and he dropped onto the bench. At his feet was the paper, creased and crumpled. Inui smoothed it out. The ink was smudged.

Inui crossed out Two Weeks and wrote in One Afternoon.

He smiled. A good plan indeed.

hahahaha so damn funny XD you gotta love INUI and the strange way his mind works :D

*nod* *nod*

Thank you! Inui is so very fun to write.

hee. I love that he is anal enough to keep and amend the plan. Well, it seemed to work after all...

very cute.

I'm sure later, he'll try to figure out *why* it worked and his brain will break. *g*

He is so my boyfriend. :)

Hee! So cute.
You are still my only connection to PoT, and I still wonder what else I could possibly need from the fandom apart from your fic. ^_^

Aw, that's so nice to hear! Thank you. :)

And now I cannot help but wonder if he lost it on purpose. Oh, Inui, without you, this series would not contain half the crack it does.

Hee! The crack that Inui doesn't actively create, he seems to attract.

LOL! oh god, you write the best Inui of all time. He's so devious, and secretly dorky (okay, maybe not secretly), and Kaidoh is so very "oh god the sempai is crazy, but i am the kouhai so maybe things will not be so bad if i take off my pants slowly so as not to startle him with sudden movement".

And also, the Raito-esque ability of Inui to take everything that goes utterly wrong and pretend it's all part of the plan is glorious indeed.

Never, never stop, please?

I love Inui so much. He is highly dorky. I wonder if Kaidoh likes him *because* or *in spite* of it. *g*

And also, the Raito-esque ability of Inui to take everything that goes utterly wrong and pretend it's all part of the plan is glorious indeed.

Ooh, good comparison. Two tennis playing evil boys. Inui's better at tennis (I think) but Raito is better at evil. I can't decide which one is more desirable!

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I'm so glad it came at the right time! *hugs back*

Excellent characterization of Kaidoh here:
Kaidoh ducked his head before he turned and ran outside

And in all, FUN! I want a stinging kiss from Kaidoh too! :D

Thank you! Kaidoh is my favourite.

*giggles* Your Inui and Kaidou kill me every time. Yay for Kaidou knowing what he wants! ^____^

International fanfic kiss day? *puzzled* Great, who was dumb enough to put it in the middle of NaNo? >.< argh

I adore FirstMove!Kaidoh. (Well, I just adore Kaidoh in general.) So glad you liked it!

Well, I just made up the whole kiss day thing because I was hoping that people would write more kissing, because I'm really in the mood to read some. It didn't really work out that way, though. Perhaps tomorrow I shall try being more demanding. *g*

This made me giggle in the best way.

There are no words for Kaidoh's pure adorableness.

I just want to squeeze him!

*giggles* oh, inui, you loveable dork~~

The dorkiness tempers the manipulativeness, I think. :)

Inui crossed out Two Weeks and wrote in One Afternoon.

!!! So much love!

Also, growly-voiced Kaidoh. Ohgod. *fans self*


I wish I could hear the growly voice all the time. I'm glad you liked it!


Did Inui lose it on purpose? Or did he just pretend to himself later that it had been his plan all along? XD

So adorable! ♥

I wonder if Inui even knows that himself! Thanks. :)