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PoT Fic: Astigmatism (Tezuka/Oishi)
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First there was oh my god fanservice (from the 30.5 fanbook, courtesy of leviosa8). Then there was oh so sweet fanart by histoirede.

And then there was fanfic. Just a snippet of fluff, really. A cookie. With icing. And glasses.

[ also posted to tezukaoishi and tenipuri_yaoi ]


Astigmatism by Halrloprillalar
Prince of Tennis, Tezuka/Oishi, 350 words, G.
What do you see?


"Let's do some more problems." Oishi bent over the textbook. "If the area of each circle is pi/4 and the distance between the centre of the circles--" He broke off when Tezuka shifted beside him. "Tezuka?"

Tezuka was leaning back against the bed, his arm over his eyes, his glasses dangling from his fingers.

"I guess it's late." Oishi closed the book and slipped it in his bag. "Don't drop those." He took the glasses from Tezuka and reached to set them down on the bedside table. Then he hesitated.

He'd always wondered what it was like not to be able to see perfectly. Maybe if he looked through Tezuka's glasses, he would see what Tezuka saw without them. He put them on.

The room seemed to bend and it made him feel almost dizzy. If he were standing, he wasn't sure he would be able walk safely. The lights were shinier and distorted. Nothing was where it should be, the world was strange and Oishi thought it would fall in on him at any moment.

"Oishi." Oishi turned his head and Tezuka -- recognizable only by his voice -- came into view. Oishi's head began to ache as his eyes struggled to focus. "Give those back." Tezuka touched Oishi's temple, slid until he found the glasses. He pulled them off Oishi's face and the world snapped back into its proper dimensions.

Tezuka lifted them to put them on, but Oishi caught his wrist. "Wait," he said. "What do you see?" Tezuka blinked once. He looked younger without his glasses, Oishi thought. He looked almost vulnerable.

"There are no sharp lines," Tezuka said. "Everything bleeds into everything else. There are no details. The lamp is a ball of light, three times as big." His eyes flicked over to the window. "The streetlights are pretty."

"What about me?" Tezuka looked back and Oishi thought how large his eyes were.

"I can't see your face," Tezuka said. "I can't see your eyes."

Oishi leaned in until their noses were almost touching. "How about now?"

"Now I'm cross-eyed," Tezuka said.

"So am I," Oishi said and he could feel Tezuka's smile when he kissed him.

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Oh god, I flail now. ;-;

Tezuka lifted them to put them on, but Oishi caught his wrist. "Wait," he said. "What do you see?" Tezuka blinked once. He looked younger without his glasses, Oishi thought. He looked almost vulnerable.

There is so much omfgyes in that paragraph I feel about to burst from otp love.

I didn't know TezuOishi was an OTP for you! I love them so goddamn much. I'm glad this bit of fluff made you happy. :)

So beautiful!!
Wait, I will try to get a better pic of the page, so that your icon doesn't look badly illuminated ^^''' Then you choose whether you change it or not. It looks like sunrays on Oishi's face, but still...

Oh, squishy boys! The temple-touching was a lovely touch.

They are so very squishy and adorable. Thank you!

Grin!

Glasses pr0n. I love it.

(Now I'd like to see Tezuka in that...hair net thingie.)

Yay! I was trying to think how often there is glasses business in my fic and as most of my pairings have either Tezuka or Inui, there's quite a lot. I even stuck some into a MomoKai once. *g*

The cross-hatching on Oishi's hair always makes me think of Archie Andrews' hair, actually.

Tezuka/Oishi don't get enough love so it increases my love for your fics tenfold.

"There are no sharp lines," Tezuka said. "Everything bleeds into everything else. There are no details. The lamp is a ball of light, three times as big." His eyes flicked over to the window. "The streetlights are pretty."

You have such a wonderful way with words. *has melted* Just... aww.

They are so underappreciated, aren't they? I'm glad you liked it! And I love your icon. That's the most excited I've ever seen Kakashi. *g*

*faints*
*cries*
There's nothing better in the world than TezuOishi fluff ;_;

... you made my day, and it's only 9am here.

I'm just so glad that you liked it! Your drawing made me so happy I couldn't help writing this.

*melts* uwah, so sweet! *_* the two of them are such ♥

yay for fanservice! ^_^

Hee, melty! I'm getting so used to fanservice that when I watch NA TV, I wonder why I'm not getting any.

And then I remember the Starbuck boxing scene and I realise that I am. *g*

I'm just totally crazy, I did the dôjinshi story-board X3 (When I should actively work on so many other things ^^;;)
Here it is, so you can check if there's something atrocious that's totally not like you had seen it. (Well, the big difference is that there are no thoughts because I suck at including thoughts in dôjinshi X3)
Don't pay attention to my beautiful hand-writing and unmatched ball-pen drawing skills, I did the whole thing in one hour ^^; *eek, drawing a "vulnerable"-looking Tezuka and a "cross-eyed" Tezuka XD*
Read it from right to left ^-^ (yes, I know, I'm weird ^^;)

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Hmm, the kiss scene will certainly look more like that (except the other way around and sitting on the floor) :


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I love it! It's really sweet. :) I think the only changes I would suggest are:

* I overstated the case when I said the lamp was "three times as big". A small bulb might be, but a larger one wouldn't be. Maybe just "twice as big". (But Christmas tree lights get huge! They're a lot prettier with my glasses off. Streetlights too.)


* Maybe change Oishi's line "What do you see?" to "Without your glasses, what do you see?" That will be clearer.


Vulnerable!Tezuka and CrossEyed!Tezuka are both very cute and Oishi is just lovely.

I should feel guilty for encouraging you when you have other things to do, but I don't. :)

I think I love you. ♥ Though I don't have my Tezuka/Oishi icons with me, so here's a GP one instead.

Thank you! *loves back*

:(((((( This is so sweet.

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